Sunday, April 09, 2006


a little explanation on this next poem. yes, it has THAT word.
as i wrote to my workgroup, i tried subbing a different term, but it
then lacked the primal/primary tone i was aiming for to go along with the iambic.
i felt the use of the most common term for sex in a poem using the most
commonly thought of form in poetry, iambic pentameter;
duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH duh DUH.
everyone learned that in school, coupled with the most common
thoughts on a first date




here it is...



first date in
iambic pentameter

HE

fuck-ME fuck-ME fuck-ME-fuck-ME-fuck-ME

SHE

love-ME-love-ME-love-ME-love-ME-love-ME.

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