Friday, August 25, 2006

a posting on the first draft of the poem :


2 halves = 1 whole



as i promised, i'd share any c&c i received on
this new poem. so far, just one from a PK member
who wrote, "i loved the gentleness of this poem.
i felt like i was being caressed by it!"

this made me smile. it's really a good feeling when a work
is well received. if i get anything more, good OR bad
i will post it and then go from there as to any changes
in the poem. s



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