i thought i'd share a few lines that came to me
last night. the beginnings of a poem to show how it goes
for me when i write.
memories that used to be
strong enough to leave your scent
on my skin
fall away like petals from roses
gone without the sun too long
Saturday, June 24, 2006
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3 comments:
and so we shed, old skin, old feelings, old emotions, old ties ...
Beautiful -- I love words that paint emotions.
hi, i'm glad you like it. it is just a begining thought. i am not sure how i will use it or change it.
i thought people might like to see a bit of the process. i have other examples in previous posts of how different poets use the same bit of an idea. i enjoy and use the feedback i get from readers, thanks.
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